The world has many people, they do something  well. They are fantastic! They all are star. It ‘s the same name of them.

　　I really admire them. And my favourite star is Bill Gates. He is very rich and he change the world. My father has some books about him. It talks about how can him rich. But most importantly, he is a kind man. He and his wife help a lot of people. He doesn‘t want to leave the money in the bank or for his family. He gives a lot of money for the poor or someone

翻譯：

世界上有許多人，他們做一些事情做得很好。他們是太棒了！他們都是明星。明星是他們為他們取的相同的名字

我真佩服他們。我最喜歡的明星是比爾蓋茨。他很富有，并且他改變了世界。我的父親有一些關于他的書。這些書講述的是他如何富有的。但最重要的是，他是一個善良的人。他和他的妻子幫助了很多人。他不想為他的家人把錢存在銀行。他給了很多錢給窮人或其他人