A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

　　When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation.Afraid of being lanughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class.When Miss Li found out my situation,she encouraged me and lent me a hand,which rapidly improved my English.With her help,I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

　　Miss Li,like a shining star,shines in my path of success.

翻譯：

一個好的老師對學生來說就像一顆閃亮的明星。李老師，我高中時的英語老師，就是我生命中一顆閃亮的星。

當我開始我的高中時，我英語學得很吃力。我不敢在公開場合開口說英語，因為我的糟糕的發(fā)音和語調(diào)。害怕被嘲笑，在英語課上我從來不舉手回答問題。李老師發(fā)現(xiàn)我的情況后，她鼓勵我，借給我一一方面，而迅速提高我的英語。在她的幫助下，我漸漸對英語感興趣了，高分。

李老師，就像一顆閃亮的星星，照耀著我前進的道路。